I Inherited a Notebook That Predicts How My Family Will D*e. The First Two Pages Just Came True.

Stephanie, a college student, is plagued by recurring nightmares of a catastrophic building collapse. Seeking answers, she visits her estranged grandmother, Iris, who reveals a terrifying secret: she has spent decades cheating Dath after surviving a disaster years ago. Iris warns that Dath has returned to claim their family. After Iris is killed in a freak accident involving a windblown compass, Stephanie inherits a notebook predicting the order of their deaths. As her skeptical relatives gather for a barbecue, bizarre accidents begin to happen, picking them off one by one. Stephanie races against time to break the pattern, but realizes too late that you cannot outrun fate.
Part 1
 
My name is Stephanie, and for the last two months, I haven’t slept more than three hours a night.
 
It’s always the same dream. I’m at this fancy grand opening—the Skyview restaurant. There’s music, people laughing, champagne glasses clinking. Then, I see it. A coin drops from the upper deck. It hits a fan, a bolt snaps, and then… chaos. The floor gives way. I can feel the sensation of falling, the smell of gas, the heat of the fire. I see my family screaming as the structure crumbles around us.
 
I wake up sweating, heart pounding out of my chest. My roommate thinks I’m stressed about finals, but I knew it was something else. In the dream, there was a woman who looked just like me, but older. My grandmother, Iris.
 
I didn’t know much about Iris. My mom, Darlene, and my Uncle Howard never spoke about her. They said she had a “mental breakdown” after my grandfather d*ed and was institutionalized. They said she was dangerous. But I needed answers.
 
Last weekend, I drove four hours upstate to the middle of nowhere. I found her address in an old box of my mom’s letters. It wasn’t a house; it was a fortress. No electronics, heavy locks, strange contraptions everywhere.
 
When Iris saw me, she didn’t look crazy. She looked terrified.
 
She told me the truth. Decades ago, she had a premonition—just like my dreams. She saved people from a building collapse. She thought she was a hero. But she learned the hard way that you can’t cheat D*ath. It doesn’t like being skipped. It comes back to balance the books.
 
“It’s not a dream, Stephanie,” she told me, her voice shaking. “It’s a warning. D*ath is coming for our bloodline.”
 
She tried to give me this old, leather-bound book. She said it contained the rules, the patterns she had learned over 20 years of hiding. I was scared. I wanted to leave. I backed out the door, telling her she needed help.
 
“Don’t go out there!” she screamed.
 
I didn’t listen. I stepped onto the porch. The wind picked up—not a normal breeze, but a sudden, violent gust. It knocked a heavy rusted compass off a wind chime.
 
It happened in slow motion. The compass flew through the air like a b*llet. Iris pushed me out of the way.
 
The compass struck her.
 
I can’t describe what happened next without getting this post taken down, but it was instant. One minute she was begging me to take the book, the next she was gone.
 
The police called it a “freak accident.” A one-in-a-million shot. My mom and Uncle Howard came to handle the funeral arrangements. They were sad, sure, but mostly they seemed relieved that the “crazy old lady” was gone.
 
They didn’t see what I saw. They didn’t see the way the wind settled the second she passed. They didn’t see the shadow that seemed to linger over the house.
 
I took the book. I hid it in my bag.
 
Yesterday was the funeral. Afterward, Uncle Howard insisted on having a family barbecue at his place to “celebrate life” and move on. He invited everyone: my cousins Eric, Julia, and Bobby. My brother Charlie.
 
I sat in the corner of the yard, opening Iris’s book. The handwriting was frantic. It listed names. It listed scenarios.
 
I turned the page and my blood ran cold. There was a drawing of a barbecue grill, a loose gas valve, and a rake hidden in the grass.
 
I looked up. Eric was lighting the grill. Bobby was running across the lawn, heading straight for a rake buried under the leaves.
 
“Stop!” I screamed, lunging forward.
 
Everyone stared at me like I had lost my mind. Like I was becoming Iris.
 
But I wasn’t crazy. The cycle had started. And we were all on the menu.

Part 2: The Barbecue

The drive from the cemetery to Uncle Howard’s house felt like a transition between two different worlds, neither of which I belonged to anymore. Behind us lay the freshly turned earth of my grandmother’s grave—a place of silence, wind, and the terrifying finality of a compass buried in a human skull. Ahead of us lay the sprawling, manicured subdivision of Whispering Pines, a place of forced smiles, homeowner association fees, and the desperate American need to pretend that everything is absolutely, one hundred percent fine.

My mother, Darlene, drove with a white-knuckled grip on the steering wheel. She hadn’t said a word since we left the funeral home. Her eyes were red, swollen behind her oversized sunglasses, but her jaw was set in that rigid line that meant “Do not speak about it.”

Beside me in the backseat, my brother Charlie was scrolling through his phone, probably looking for a distraction—sports scores, memes, anything to drown out the memory of the police tape fluttering on Iris’s porch.

I looked down at my lap. My fingers were tracing the cracked leather cover of the notebook Iris had thrown to me in her final moments. It smelled like mildew, old paper, and something metallic—like dried blood. I hadn’t opened it since the night she died. I had been too afraid. But now, with the hum of the tires on the asphalt and the suffocating silence of the car, I felt a pull. A physical urge to see what was inside.

“Don’t bring that into the house,” Mom said suddenly, her eyes flicking to me in the rearview mirror. Her voice was sharp, cutting through the air conditioning.

“It’s just a book, Mom,” I whispered.

“It’s her garbage, Stephanie. Iris was… she was sick. We just buried her. I don’t want her paranoid delusions ruining Howard’s gathering. We are going to go there, we are going to eat, we are going to support your uncle, and we are going to act normal. Do you hear me?”

Normal.

The word tasted like ash in my mouth. There was nothing normal about the way the wind had surged that day. There was nothing normal about the way Iris had looked at me—not with madness, but with the terrifying clarity of someone who sees a train coming before anyone else hears the whistle.

We pulled into Uncle Howard’s driveway. It was packed. SUVs, luxury sedans, a few trucks. Howard was the success story of the family—a real estate developer who believed that net worth was the only metric of a life well-lived. His house was a massive, modern structure of glass and stone, surrounded by a lawn so green it looked painted on.

As I stepped out of the car, the sound hit me first. Laughter. Music. The clinking of bottles. It was a stark, violent contrast to the funeral. It felt wrong. It felt like dancing on a grave.

“Put the book away,” Mom hissed, smoothing down her black dress.

I shoved the notebook deep into my oversized tote bag, but I didn’t let go of it. I kept my hand wrapped around it, grounding myself.

We walked into the backyard. It was the quintessential American barbecue setup. A massive stainless-steel grill was smoking in the corner, radiating waves of heat that distorted the air. A cooler the size of a coffin was filled with ice and beer. My cousins—Eric, Julia, and Bobby—were clustered around a patio table, red Solo cups in hand.

Uncle Howard was holding court near the grill, wearing an apron that said “Grill Sergeant.” He held a pair of tongs like a scepter. His face was flushed, likely from a combination of the heat, the scotch he was nursing, and the adrenaline of playing host.

“Darlene! Charlie! Steph!” Howard boomed, spreading his arms wide. “Glad you made it. Glad you made it. Grab a drink. We’re celebrating Iris’s peace today. No tears. She wouldn’t want tears.”

He didn’t know what Iris wanted. None of them did.

I drifted to the edge of the patio, feeling like a ghost. I watched them. Eric, the oldest cousin, was twenty-five and worked in finance. He was currently trying to impress a girl I didn’t recognize with a story about his gym routine. Julia, twenty-two, was taking selfies with a glass of white wine, tilting her head to catch the “perfect” lighting. Bobby, the youngest at nineteen, was tossing a football up and down, looking bored.

It was all so fragile.

I sat on a stone bench near the garden, hidden behind a trellis of climbing roses, and pulled the book out. My hands were trembling.

I opened the cover.

The first few pages were gibberish—dates, weather patterns, coordinates. But then, the handwriting changed. It became frantic. Spiked.

The Order, it read.

Below that, a list of names. Iris. Paul. (Crossed out). The Skyview survivors. (Crossed out).

I turned the page.

The Bloodline. Howard. Darlene. Eric. Julia. Bobby. Stephanie. Charlie.

My breath hitched. It was a family tree, but it looked more like a hit list. Beside each name were scribbles, drawings, and chaotic notes.

I flipped to the current date. The ink looked fresh, though I knew Iris hadn’t written in it for days.

There was a drawing. It was crude, done in charcoal or heavy pencil. It showed a backyard. A grill. And something else…

I squinted at the page. It looked like a mechanism. A series of gears? No, it was a chain reaction. A domino effect. Fire. Glass. Wind. Metal.

I looked up at the party. The wind chimes on Howard’s back porch tinkled softly. My stomach dropped. The wind. It was here.

“Hey, gloom and doom.”

I jumped, slamming the book shut. It was Eric. He was grinning, spinning his sunglasses by the arm.

“Jesus, Eric. You scared me,” I said, clutching the bag to my chest.

“You’re sitting in the bushes reading a diary at a party,” Eric laughed, taking a swig of his beer. “You’re the one being weird, Steph. Come on. Have a burger. Dad bought the expensive wagyu stuff. Don’t let Grandma’s crazy rub off on you.”

“She wasn’t crazy,” I said, my voice quiet but firm.

Eric rolled his eyes. “She lived in a bunker and thought the toaster was spying on her. Look, I get it. You were there when… it happened. That’s trauma. But don’t make it into something supernatural. It was a freak accident. The wind blew, the thing fell. Physics. Bad luck. End of story.”

“It wasn’t just wind, Eric. She knew. She told me not to go outside.”

“Yeah, and if she hadn’t run out after you, she’d be alive. So, technically…” He trailed off, realizing how callous he sounded. “Look, just… come have a drink. Mom’s making her famous potato salad. It’ll k*ll you if you don’t try it.”

He laughed at his own poor choice of words and walked away.

It’ll kll you.*

I watched him walk toward the grill. He passed the cooler.

And that’s when I saw it. The first domino.

Bobby was trying to get a beer out of the ice chest. The cooler was packed tight. He was using a glass bottle to pry another bottle loose. He was frustrated, jamming it down.

Clink.

A sharp, distinct sound. The neck of the bottle in his hand shattered.

“Aw, man,” Bobby muttered. He looked around to see if anyone noticed.

Uncle Howard was busy flipping burgers. Aunt Brenda was in the kitchen.

Bobby quickly picked up the big pieces of glass and threw them in the trash. He wiped his hand on his shorts. Then, he used the plastic scoop to churn the ice, burying the evidence.

He didn’t see the shards. The tiny, razor-sharp slivers of clear glass that had fallen into the ice. They disappeared instantly, camouflaged by the frozen cubes.

My heart hammered against my ribs.

Glass. The book had said glass.

I stood up. “Bobby!”

He looked over, startled. “What? I didn’t do anything.”

“Did you just break glass in the cooler?”

“Shhh!” He put a finger to his lips, glancing at his dad. “It was just a chip. I got it all out. Don’t be a snitch, Steph. Dad will flip if he thinks I’m wasting the good beer.”

“You have to empty that cooler,” I said, walking toward him. “Someone could swallow it.”

“I said I got it out! You’re being paranoid. God, you really are turning into Iris.” He grabbed a fresh beer and walked away, leaving the cooler lid open.

I stood there, staring at the innocent-looking mound of ice. I needed to dump it. I reached for the handle.

“Stephanie! Don’t you dare!”

It was Aunt Brenda. She was marching out of the patio door carrying a massive tray of condiments. “That is sixty dollars worth of ice and imported craft beer. Do not touch it.”

“Aunt Brenda, Bobby broke a bottle inside. There’s glass—”

“Bobby!” Brenda yelled across the yard.

“I didn’t!” Bobby shouted back, lying effortlessly. “Steph’s making stuff up because she’s bored!”

Brenda turned to me, her expression tight. “Honey, we are all stressed. But please, don’t cause a scene. Your uncle is trying very hard to make this a nice afternoon. Go sit down.”

She shooed me away like a nuisance fly.

I retreated to my bench, my pulse racing. I felt helpless. I looked at the book again.

The Fire.

I looked at the grill. Uncle Howard had stepped away to talk to my mom. Eric had taken over the tongs.

Eric was impatient. He was turning the knobs on the gas tank.

“This thing is taking forever to heat up,” Eric muttered. He twisted the valve. Hiss.

He twisted it more. The hissing grew louder.

“Eric, stop!” I whispered to myself.

He grabbed a lighter—one of those long-necked wand lighters. He clicked it. Nothing. He clicked it again.

Click. Click.

The gas was pooling. I could smell it from twenty feet away. The heavy, rotten-egg stench of propane.

He leaned in close to check the burner.

“Eric, move!” I screamed, jumping to my feet.

My scream made him jump. He pulled his face back just as he clicked the lighter one last time.

WOOSH.

A fireball erupted from the grill, singing his eyebrows and sending a wave of heat across the patio.

“Whoa!” Eric stumbled back, laughing nervously. “Okay, okay! She’s hot! We’re cooking with gas now!”

The family laughed. Uncle Howard clapped him on the shoulder. “Careful there, pyro. Don’t burn the house down.”

My knees gave out, and I sat back down. It hadn’t happened. He was fine.

Maybe I was crazy. Maybe the book was just the ramblings of a sick woman, and I was projecting my grief onto a series of clumsy but harmless events.

Then, the wind picked up again.

It wasn’t a breeze. It was a cold, deliberate draft that rattled the leaves of the oak tree above me. It felt like someone breathing down my neck.

I looked at the book. The page had flipped in the wind.

It wasn’t a drawing of Eric.

The drawing showed a crown. A King.

The Head of the House.

Howard.

I looked at my uncle. He was laughing, wiping sweat from his forehead.

“Alright, everyone! Burgers are almost done! Let’s have a toast to Iris!”

He walked over to the beverage station. To the cooler.

“No,” I whispered.

He grabbed a heavy crystal glass. He reached into the cooler. He scooped up a mountain of ice.

I saw the light catch it. A glimmer. Not ice. Something sharper.

“Uncle Howard, wait!” I started running.

“To Iris!” Howard bellowed, raising the glass. “May she finally find some peace and quiet!”

Everyone raised their red cups. “To Iris!”

Howard tilted his head back. He took a massive gulp of the scotch and soda he had just poured over the ice.

I froze halfway across the yard.

He swallowed. He lowered the glass, smiling. “Ah. That hits the spot.”

Nothing happened.

He didn’t choke. He didn’t bleed.

I stood there, panting, looking like a lunatic in the middle of the lawn.

“Stephanie?” Mom asked, her voice low and embarrassed. “What is wrong with you?”

“I… I thought…”

Howard crunched on a piece of ice. Crunch.

He swallowed again.

Then, his face changed.

It wasn’t pain at first. It was confusion. He coughed. A small, polite cough.

Then he coughed again, harder. He brought his hand to his throat.

“Howard?” Brenda stepped forward. “Honey? Did something go down the wrong pipe?”

Howard tried to speak, but only a wet, gurgling sound came out. He dropped the glass. It shattered on the patio stones—shards mingling with the shards that were already in his throat.

Blood began to dribble from the corner of his mouth. Not a little. A lot. Bright, arterial red.

“Dad!” Julia screamed.

Chaos erupted.

Howard staggered backward, clutching his neck. His eyes were wide, bulging with terror. He was drowning in his own blood. The shard must have severed something vital, or lodged deep in the soft tissue.

“Call 911!” Eric yelled, rushing toward his father.

Howard flailed his arms, pushing Eric away in his panic. He couldn’t breathe. He was stumbling blindly.

He stumbled off the paved patio and onto the grass.

“Help him!” Mom screamed.

I watched, frozen. The book in my hand felt hot.

Howard was staggering toward the edge of the yard, where the landscaping crew had been working earlier that day. The lawn sloped downward sharply there, leading to a retaining wall.

Parked at the top of the slope was the massive, industrial-ride-on mower the landscapers used. It was a beast of a machine, yellow and black, with blades large enough to clear a field.

It was off. It was safe.

But Howard, in his blinded, choking agony, slammed his body weight against the back of it.

He hit the gear shift lever.

The machine was old. The parking brake wasn’t fully engaged. The sudden impact of a two-hundred-pound man knocked the neutral gear into neutral-roll.

The mower groaned. Gravity took over.

“Dad, watch out!” Bobby screamed.

Howard fell to his knees, still clutching his throat, blood pouring over his Grill Sergeant apron.

The mower began to roll backward down the slope.

But Howard wasn’t behind it anymore. He had fallen to the side.

He was safe from the mower.

Thank God, I thought. He’s hurt, but he won’t be crushed.

But the universe—or whatever dark force Iris had warned me about—wasn’t done.

As the heavy mower rolled down the hill, gaining speed, its rear tire hit a stone. The machine bucked violently.

Attached to the side of the mower was a bungee cord holding a long, heavy metal landscaping rake.

The jolt snapped the bungee cord.

The rake didn’t just fall. It catapulted.

It flew through the air, spinning end over end.

Howard was on his hands and knees, gasping for air, looking up just in time to see the metal teeth coming toward him.

It didn’t hit him like a spear. It hit the propane tank of the outdoor patio heater standing directly behind him.

CLANG.

The heavy, towering heater, destabilized by the blow, tipped over.

It fell like a felled tree.

Directly onto Howard.

The heavy steel dome of the heater crushed his skull against the patio stones with a sound like a melon being dropped from a roof.

The silence that followed was absolute.

The birds stopped singing. The wind stopped blowing.

For three seconds, nobody moved. We just stared at the gruesome tableau. The blood from his throat. The crushed head. The innocent mower rolling gently to a stop at the bottom of the hill.

Then, Aunt Brenda screamed.

It was a sound that tore the sky open. A primal, animalistic shriek of pure loss.

The party dissolved into madness. Mom grabbed Charlie and pulled him back. Eric fell to his knees beside his father’s body, his hands hovering, afraid to touch the carnage.

I didn’t scream. I didn’t move.

I looked down at the book in my hands.

The drawing of the crown. The king. The gears.

It hadn’t predicted a mower accident. It hadn’t predicted a rake. It hadn’t predicted glass.

It had predicted all of it.

The glass set the stage. The panic moved the actor. The machine provided the force. The object delivered the blow.

It was a design. A perfect, inescapable Rube Goldberg machine made of bad luck and physics.

Sirens wailed in the distance, getting louder.

I felt a hand on my arm. It was Charlie. His face was pale, drained of blood.

“Steph,” he whispered, his voice trembling. “What the hell just happened?”

I looked at him, my eyes burning with tears I couldn’t shed yet.

“It’s not an accident, Charlie,” I said, opening the book to the next page. “It’s a list.”

Charlie looked down at the book. His eyes scanned the names.

Howard was crossed out. The ink looked old, dry, as if it had been crossed out years ago. But I knew it hadn’t been there ten minutes ago.

The next name on the list seemed to glow on the page.

Eric.

I looked up at Eric, who was sobbing over his father’s body, his shirt stained with blood. He was alive. He was grieving.

But as I watched, I saw something that made my blood freeze.

Above Eric, a single loose screw from the patio awning was vibrating. Wiggling. Loosened by the impact of the heater falling.

It wasn’t over. It was never going to be over.

“We have to go,” I told Charlie. “We have to get Eric out of here.”

“What? We can’t leave! Dad—Uncle Howard is—”

“He’s gone, Charlie! There’s nothing we can do for him. But Eric is next.”

“You’re talking crazy,” Charlie snapped, pulling away. “Stop with the book!”

“Look at it!” I shoved the page in his face. “Look at the ink! It crossed itself out, Charlie! I didn’t touch it!”

Charlie looked. Really looked. He saw the impossible age of the ink on the fresh death.

Fear, real and primal, dawned in his eyes.

“What do we do?” he asked.

“We figure out the pattern,” I said, closing the book. “And we stop it before it kills us all.”

The police cars pulled into the driveway, their lights flashing red and blue, painting the horrific scene in a disco of tragedy.

I watched the officers run into the yard. They saw an accident. A terrible, unfortunate domestic accident.

I saw the Grim Reaper’s footprints in the grass.

And he was already walking toward Eric.

End of Part 2

Part 3: The List

The flashing red and blue lights of the police cruisers reflected off the wet pavement of Uncle Howard’s driveway, creating a kaleidoscope of tragedy that felt almost hypnotic. The coroner’s van had just pulled away, taking the broken body of the man who, only hours ago, had been flipping burgers and laughing about the weather.

The silence that followed was heavy, suffocating. It was the kind of silence that rings in your ears.

My mother, Darlene, was inside the house with Aunt Brenda. Brenda had been sedated by the paramedics after she tried to climb into the ambulance with Howard’s body. The cousins—Julia and Bobby—were sitting on the front porch steps, staring at nothing. They looked like statues, frozen in the exact moment their lives had shattered.

But I couldn’t freeze. I didn’t have the luxury of grief. Not yet.

I grabbed my brother Charlie by the sleeve of his dress shirt and dragged him toward my car, a beat-up Honda Civic parked just outside the police tape.

“Steph, stop,” Charlie hissed, yanking his arm back. His face was pale, his eyes rimmed with red. “What are you doing? We need to go be with Mom. We need to help Brenda.”

“We can’t help them,” I whispered, my voice trembling but hard. “Not the way you think. Get in the car, Charlie. Now.”

“You’re acting insane. Just like—”

“Just like Iris?” I cut him off. “Yeah. And look where we are. Howard is dead, exactly like she said he would be. If you want to stay here and wait for the next ‘freak accident,’ go ahead. But I’m going to figure out who’s next.”

Charlie looked at the house, then back at me. He saw the terror in my eyes, but he also saw the certainty. He cursed under his breath, opened the passenger door, and slid inside.

I climbed into the driver’s seat and locked the doors. The air inside the car was stale, smelling of old coffee and the lingering scent of funeral flowers from earlier that day. I reached into my tote bag and pulled out the notebook.

My hands were shaking so badly I could barely turn the pages.

“Okay,” I said, taking a deep breath. “We need to look at this rationally.”

“Rationally?” Charlie let out a dark, hysterical laugh. “A lawnmower just threw a rake at our uncle, Stephanie. There is nothing rational about this.”

“It’s a design,” I said, opening the book to the page with the family tree. “Iris saw it. She saw the pattern. Remember what she said? She saved people at the restaurant. She interrupted the order. Death has a list, and it doesn’t like being skipped.”

I pointed to the names.

Iris & Paul (Grandparents) Children: Howard, Darlene. Grandchildren (Howard’s line): Eric, Julia, Bobby. Grandchildren (Darlene’s line): Stephanie, Charlie.

“Howard is crossed out,” I said, tracing the thick black line that had appeared over his name. “He was the first of the second generation. Mom is safe for now because the pattern seems to be following the male line first, or maybe it’s jumping generations. But look here.”

I flipped to the page of scribbled notes Iris had made years ago.

The blood debt follows the birth order.

“Howard was the oldest,” I reasoned. “He’s gone. Who is the eldest male left in his direct line?”

Charlie stared at the page. His throat bobbed as he swallowed hard.

“Eric,” he whispered.

“Eric,” I repeated. The name hung in the air like a curse.

“But… it could be random,” Charlie argued, his voice pleading. “Maybe it’s just bad luck. Maybe Howard was just clumsy.”

“And Iris? Was she clumsy? Was the compass flying through the air clumsy?” I slammed the book shut. “We don’t have time for denial, Charlie. We have to find Eric.”

“He left,” Charlie said. “Right after the police took the statement. He looked… manic. He said he couldn’t stay in the house. He said he needed to work.”

“Work? At a time like this?”

“He’s coping, Steph. Some people drink, some people cry. Eric works. He’s been obsessing over that new renovation project downtown. The old auto garage he’s turning into a detailing shop.”

My stomach dropped. An auto garage.

Tools. Chemicals. Heavy machinery. Electricity.

It was a playground for Death.

“We have to go,” I said, jamming the key into the ignition. “Right now.”


The drive downtown was a blur of yellow streetlights and rain-slicked asphalt. A storm was rolling in, the kind of heavy, humid summer storm that makes the air feel thick enough to chew. Lightning flashed in the distance, illuminating the skyline in jagged bursts of white.

“Check the book,” I commanded, swerving around a slow-moving truck. “See if there’s anything about how. Anything about water, or cars, or fire.”

Charlie fumbled with the book, using the light from his phone. “It’s hard to read, Steph. Her handwriting is all over the place. There are drawings of… I don’t know, chains? Pulleys? And there’s a note here: ‘The air will choke, the spark will bite.’

“The air will choke,” I muttered. “Howard choked. Maybe that part is done?”

“Or maybe it’s a theme,” Charlie said unhelpfully. “Steph, slow down. You’re going to kill us before the curse does.”

I ignored him and pressed harder on the gas.

We arrived at Eric’s shop twenty minutes later. It was located in an industrial district that had seen better days—brick warehouses with broken windows, chain-link fences topped with razor wire, and flickering streetlamps that buzzed like angry hornets.

Eric’s shop, Prestige Detail, was a standalone brick building at the end of a cul-de-sac. The lights were on inside, casting long, distorted shadows against the frosted glass of the garage bay doors.

I parked the car haphazardly on the curb and jumped out. The wind hit me instantly—a strong, gusty wind that whipped my hair across my face. It felt personal. It felt like the same wind that had knocked the compass loose at Iris’s house.

“Stay close,” I told Charlie.

We ran to the side door. It was locked. I pounded on the metal frame.

“Eric! Open up! It’s Stephanie!”

No answer. Just the hum of machinery from inside.

I ran to the bay window and peered through a gap in the blinds.

The interior was a cavernous space, half-renovated. The floor was polished concrete, slick and shiny. In the center of the room sat a vintage Mustang, its hood propped open.

Eric was there. He was wearing coveralls, pacing back and forth near a workbench cluttered with tools, bottles of fluid, and rags. He looked agitated. He was shouting at someone on his phone, pacing aggressively.

“He’s in there,” I said. “He’s on the phone.”

I banged on the glass. “Eric!”

He looked up, saw me, and scowled. He hung up the phone and marched over to the side door, throwing it open with enough force to rattle the hinges.

“What the hell are you doing here?” he snapped. His eyes were wild, bloodshot and wide. He smelled like sweat and industrial cleaner. “I told Mom I needed space. That includes you two.”

“Eric, please,” I said, stepping into the doorway before he could slam it shut. “We need to talk to you. It’s about Dad. It’s about the accident.”

“I don’t want to talk about it!” Eric yelled, his voice cracking. “I just watched my father’s head get crushed by a patio heater, Stephanie! I don’t want to talk. I want to work. I want to fix this engine. I want to do something that makes sense, because nothing else makes sense right now!”

“That’s exactly it,” Charlie said, stepping up beside me. “It doesn’t make sense. That’s why you’re in danger.”

Eric let out a harsh, incredulous laugh. “Oh, God. Here we go. The curse. The magic book. Did you bring your crystal ball, too?”

“Listen to me!” I grabbed his arm. His muscles were tense, vibrating with adrenaline. “Iris warned us. She said Death has a list. Howard was first. The book… it implies you’re next, Eric. You’re the eldest son. You’re in the direct line.”

Eric shoved me off. “Get out. Get out of my shop.”

“We’re not leaving you alone,” I said, planting my feet. “Look around, Eric! This place is a death trap. You’ve got power tools, you’ve got chemicals, you’ve got a car on a lift. If something happens…”

“The only thing happening here is you disrespecting my father’s memory with this superstitious garbage!” Eric shouted. He turned his back on us and walked toward the workbench.

“I’m calling the police,” Charlie whispered to me.

“And tell them what?” I hissed back. “That a ghost is going to kill our cousin? They’ll lock us up. We just have to stay here. We have to watch him.”

I followed Eric into the shop, my eyes darting around, scanning for threats.

The room was a minefield.

To my left, a massive industrial floor fan was whirring, oscillating back and forth. It was an old model, the metal cage rusted, the blades spinning with a menacing thrum-thrum-thrum.

To my right, a shelf was stacked high with heavy gallon jugs of fluids—coolant, oil, brake fluid, and a large clear container labeled Industrial Disinfectant / Solvent.

Above the workbench, a heavy chain hung from a pulley system used to hoist engines. The chain swayed slightly in the draft from the fan.

“Eric, stop working,” I pleaded. “Just come home with us. Sleep at Mom’s house. Just for tonight.”

Eric ignored me. He grabbed a rag and the bottle of disinfectant. “I’m cleaning the parts. Leave me alone.”

He slammed the bottle down on the metal table.

Bang.

The vibration traveled through the table.

On the shelf above the table, one of the heavy jugs shifted. Just a fraction of an inch.

“Eric, watch out!” I lunged forward.

“Don’t touch me!” Eric spun around, swinging his arm.

His elbow hit the open bottle of disinfectant on the table.

It tipped over.

The clear liquid gushed out, pooling rapidly on the polished concrete floor. It smelled sharp, chemical, stinging my nose.

“Great. Look what you made me do!” Eric yelled, throwing his hands up.

He stepped back to avoid the puddle.

His boot heel hit the slick liquid.

It happened fast, but also agonizingly slow, just like with Howard.

Eric’s feet flew out from under him. He flailed, his arms grasping for purchase.

He grabbed the hanging chain to steady himself.

“Gotcha,” he grunted, holding the chain.

But the chain wasn’t secured to the ceiling beam. It was looped around a hook on the high shelf—the shelf holding the heavy equipment.

His weight pulled the chain taut.

Creeeeak.

The shelf above him groaned. The metal brackets, old and rusted, shrieked in protest.

“Eric, let go!” Charlie screamed.

But Eric was still sliding on the disinfectant. He was holding the chain for dear life, trying to pull himself upright.

The tension on the chain was too much. The hook on the shelf snapped.

The chain whipped downward.

It didn’t hit him. Instead, it swung wildly, the heavy metal hook at the end acting like a pendulum.

The hook smashed into the oscillating fan.

CRUNCH.

The metal cage of the fan dented inward. The blades inside, spinning at high velocity, shattered against the obstruction.

Shrapnel—pieces of plastic fan blade and metal wire—exploded outward like a grenade.

Eric covered his face, screaming as a piece of plastic sliced his cheek.

But the fan didn’t stop. The motor was still running, whining with the strain. The impact had knocked the fan over.

It fell face down onto the puddle of disinfectant.

The liquid splashed up.

The fan’s motor was sparking. Zzzzt. Zzzzt.

I saw the spark. Blue and bright.

I saw the label on the spilled bottle again. Flammable. Highly Volatile.

“Fire!” I screamed.

The spark hit the liquid.

WHOOSH.

The floor didn’t just catch fire; it erupted. The disinfectant acted like lighter fluid on a grill. A wave of blue and orange flame raced across the concrete, encircling Eric.

He scrambled backward, terrified, crab-walking away from the heat.

“Help! Help me!” he shrieked.

“Get the extinguisher!” I yelled at Charlie.

Charlie frantically looked around. “Where is it? Where is it?!”

There was one by the door. I ran for it.

But the fire was moving faster than I could run. It was chasing the trail of liquid that had flowed into the floor drain—and across the workbench.

Eric was trapped against the wall. The fire was in front of him. The workbench was behind him.

He tried to stand up, slipping again on the oily residue.

As he stood, he backed into the workbench. He knocked over a container of small metal ball bearings.

They scattered across the floor like marbles.

Eric stepped on them.

He lost his balance completely. He fell backward, hard.

His neck landed on the edge of a metal bucket. He gasped, winded.

But the real threat came from above.

The chain he had pulled earlier—the one that had snapped the shelf—was still swinging. It had gotten tangible with a cable connected to the overhead lighting rig.

When Eric fell, his foot kicked the leg of the workbench. The vibration traveled up the wall.

The lighting rig, destabilized by the chain, gave way.

A heavy, industrial fluorescent light fixture detached from the ceiling.

It swung down on its wire.

It swung directly toward Eric’s head.

“No!” I screamed, fumbling with the pin of the fire extinguisher.

The light fixture missed his head.

It smashed into the shelf of chemicals above the fire.

Glass jars of solvent shattered. They rained down on Eric.

Now, he wasn’t just near the fire. He was covered in fuel.

The flames leaped up, hungry and impossibly fast. They caught the leg of his coveralls.

“Get it off! Get it off!” Eric screamed, tearing at his clothes.

I finally got the pin out. I aimed the nozzle and squeezed.

Phhhht.

A pathetic puff of white powder came out. Then nothing.

The gauge on the extinguisher read Empty.

“It’s empty!” I threw the canister down in horror. “Charlie, find something else! A blanket! Anything!”

Charlie was stripping off his jacket, his face a mask of pure panic.

But it was too late.

The fire had reached the shelf where the compressed air cans were stored.

BANG!

A can exploded in the heat.

The force of the explosion threw Charlie and me backward against the garage door. My ears rang. The heat was blistering.

Through the smoke, I saw Eric. He was rolling on the ground, trying to smother the flames.

He managed to stand up, a pillar of fire. He was blinded by the smoke and pain.

He ran.

But he didn’t run toward the door. In his disorientation, he ran toward the back of the shop. Toward the open elevator shaft that he was using to haul parts to the basement storage.

“Eric, stop! The shaft!” I screamed, my throat raw.

He couldn’t hear me over the roar of the fire and his own screams.

He hit the safety rail. It was temporary—just a piece of wood taped up.

He crashed through it.

For a second, he hung there in the air, a burning silhouette against the dark void of the shaft.

Then, he was gone.

We didn’t hear him hit the bottom. The sound of the fire was too loud.

The sprinklers finally kicked on.

Water rained down from the ceiling, hissing as it hit the flames. The black smoke turned into thick, gray steam.

I sat on the cold concrete, soaked to the bone, staring at the empty elevator shaft.

Charlie was beside me, vomiting onto the floor.

The water mixed with the soot and the unburned disinfectant, swirling around our shoes.

It was over. The list had claimed another name.


We sat in the parking lot for an hour, waiting for the coroner again. Waiting for Mom again.

The rain had stopped, but the storm inside my head was just beginning.

I pulled the book out of my bag. It was damp from the sprinklers, the pages swollen and crinkled.

I opened it to the list.

The ink was wet, bleeding into the paper.

Eric was crossed out. A thick, dark slash that looked like a wound.

My eyes moved down the list.

Julia. Bobby.

Then, separated by a small gap:

Stephanie. Charlie.

“We failed,” Charlie whispered. He was shivering, wrapped in a blanket a paramedic had given him. “We were right there, Steph. We were right there and we couldn’t stop it. In fact… I think we made it worse. If we hadn’t come in, he wouldn’t have turned around. He wouldn’t have knocked the bottle over.”

I looked at him. The realization hit me like a physical blow.

He was right.

Our interference was part of the design. By trying to save him, we had provided the distraction that initiated the sequence.

“It knows,” I whispered. “It knows what we’re going to do before we do it.”

“So what? We just give up?” Charlie asked, his voice breaking. “We just wait for Julia to die? Then Bobby? Then us?”

“No,” I said, wiping a smudge of soot from the page. “We don’t give up. We find the loophole.”

I flipped through the back pages of the book. Iris had filled them with ramblings about interventions and blockades. Most of it was nonsense.

But then, I saw a name written in the margin, circled three times in red ink.

William Bludworth.

Beside the name was a note: He knows the rules. He survived the 180 flight. He knows about the balance.

“Who is William Bludworth?” Charlie asked, reading over my shoulder.

“I don’t know,” I said. “But Iris thought he was important. She wrote here: ‘Only new life can defeat Death.’

“New life?” Charlie frowned. “What does that mean? Is someone pregnant?”

I shook my head. “I don’t know. But we have to find out. Julia is next. We have to get to her before…”

My phone buzzed.

It was a text from Mom.

Come home. Now. We are all staying at Aunt Brenda’s tonight. I don’t want anyone alone.

“They’re gathering together,” I said, staring at the screen. “Mom, Aunt Brenda, Julia, Bobby.”

“That’s good, right? Safety in numbers?” Charlie asked.

I looked at the book. At the drawing on the next page.

It showed a house. It showed wires. It showed water.

“No,” I said, starting the car. “It’s not safety. It’s a target rich environment.”

“What do you mean?”

“If they’re all in one house,” I said, reversing out of the parking spot, “Death doesn’t have to chase them one by one. It can take them all out at once.”

The car tires screeched as I peeled out of the industrial park.

“Where are we going?” Charlie gripped the dashboard.

“To the hospital,” I said. “To find this William guy. The notes say he works at the county morgue.”

“The morgue?” Charlie’s face went white. “Great. Of course he does.”

“We need answers, Charlie. Because if we go back to that house without a plan, we’re just walking into a grave.”

As we drove, the streetlights seemed to flicker in time with my heartbeat. Every intersection felt like a gamble. Every red light felt like a warning.

The list was moving faster now. It had tasted blood, and it was hungry for more.

I looked at the rearview mirror. For a split second, I swore I saw a shadow in the back seat. Something dark and formless.

I blinked, and it was gone.

But the cold feeling on the back of my neck remained.

We were being hunted. And the hunter never missed.

Part 4: No Escape

The County Morgue was located in the basement of St. Jude’s Hospital, a place that smelled of antiseptic, floor wax, and the metallic tang of refrigerated air. It was a place where time seemed to stop, where the frantic energy of the living surrendered to the cold bureaucracy of the dead.

My brother Charlie and I walked down the long, fluorescent-lit corridor, our footsteps echoing loudly on the linoleum. My clothes were still damp from the sprinklers at Eric’s shop, sticking to my skin like a second, freezing layer. Every time I shivered, I saw Eric’s face—the terror in his eyes as he vanished into the elevator shaft.

“We shouldn’t be here,” Charlie whispered, his voice cracking. He was hugging himself, looking at the closed doors we passed. Autopsy Room A. Evidence Storage. Viewing Room. “This is crazy, Steph. We should be with Mom. We should be protecting Julia.”

“We are protecting them,” I said, though my voice lacked the conviction I wanted it to have. “Iris wrote this name down for a reason. William Bludworth. He knows the design. If there’s a way to stop this, he’s the only one who can tell us.”

We reached the end of the hall. A heavy double door with a frosted glass window stood before us. Inside, a shadow moved—tall, thin, and precise.

I pushed the door open.

The room was vast and freezing. Stainless steel tables lined the center of the room, gleaming under the harsh surgical lights. On the far wall, a wall of refrigerated drawers hummed with a low, constant vibration.

A man was standing over a body on the central table. The body was covered in a sheet, but the charred smell that permeated the room told me exactly who it was.

Eric.

The man looked up. He was tall, with skin the color of old parchment and eyes that seemed to have seen too much. He wore a pristine black suit under his lab coat. He didn’t look surprised to see us. In fact, he looked like he had been expecting us.

“William Bludworth?” I asked, stepping into the room.

He didn’t answer immediately. He carefully pulled the sheet up over Eric’s face, his movements respectful but detached. He stripped off his latex gloves with a sharp snap.

“The Bloodline,” he said. His voice was deep, resonant, like a cello played in an empty room. “I wondered when the rest of you would arrive.”

“You knew Iris,” I said, holding up the water-damaged notebook.

Bludworth walked around the table, wiping his hands on a towel. “I know many people, Stephanie. Especially the ones who try to cheat the house.”

He stopped in front of us, leaning back against a metal counter. “I saw the report. A freak accident at a detailing shop. A chain reaction. Fire. Gravity. Bad luck.” He smiled, a thin, humorless expression. “But you and I know there is no such thing as luck, is there?”

“Stop speaking in riddles,” Charlie snapped, his fear turning into anger. “Our brother is dead. Our uncle is dead. Our grandmother is dead. We need to know how to stop it.”

Bludworth looked at Charlie with a mix of pity and amusement. “Stop it? You don’t stop gravity, son. You don’t stop the tide. Death has a design. Your grandmother… she saw the threads. She saved you all at the Skyview. She pulled you out of the collapse before your time.”

He walked over to a sink and turned on the tap. “But you can’t cheat the design. You just… delayed it. You created a wrinkle in the fabric. And now, the fabric is smoothing itself out.”

“We know the list,” I said, stepping closer. “We know the order. Howard. Eric. Julia. Bobby. Mom. Charlie. Me. We want to know how to break the chain.”

Bludworth turned off the water and looked at me intensely. “There are rules. Old rules. A life for a life.”

“What does that mean?” I asked.

“It means the ledger must be balanced,” Bludworth said. “If it’s your turn to die, and you don’t… someone else must take your place. Someone who wasn’t on the list. You have to intervene. You have to kill the killer.”

“We’re not murderers,” I said, horrified.

“Then you’re victims,” Bludworth shrugged. “But there is… another way. A rarer path.”

He walked over to a filing cabinet and pulled out a file. Iris Vance.

“Your grandmother wrote about it,” he said. “Only new life can defeat Death.”

“New life?” Charlie asked. “Like… a baby?”

“Perhaps,” Bludworth said. “If a child is born to someone on the list… a life that was never meant to exist… it creates a ripple. A blockage. It breaks the chain.”

I thought about Julia. She wasn’t pregnant. I wasn’t pregnant. Mom certainly wasn’t.

“There’s no baby,” I said, feeling hope drain out of me.

“Then there is the other interpretation,” Bludworth said softly. “To be reborn, one must first die.”

He looked at me, his eyes dark and unreadable. “If you die… really die… and the line moves past you… and then you return… perhaps the design will think the debt is paid.”

“You mean resuscitation?” I asked. “Clinical death?”

“It’s a gamble,” Bludworth said, turning back to Eric’s body. “But when the house is burning down, sometimes the only way out is through the fire. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have work to do. Your cousin was… difficult to reassemble.”

We left the morgue in silence. The heavy door clicked shut behind us, sealing the cold air inside.

“He’s crazy,” Charlie said as we walked back to the car. “He’s talking about suicide, Steph. Die and come back? That’s his advice?”

“It’s a loophole,” I said, my mind racing. “If the list skips us because we’re dead… and then we come back… maybe it stops.”

“Or maybe we just die,” Charlie argued. “And then we stay dead.”

We reached the car. The rain was coming down harder now, hammering against the roof of the Civic. I looked at my phone. Five missed calls from Mom.

“They’re at Aunt Brenda’s,” I said. “Julia is next. We have to get there. We have to figure this out.”


The drive to Aunt Brenda’s house was a nightmare. The storm had turned the roads into rivers. Tree branches whipped against the windshield, and the wind howled like a wounded animal. It felt like the world itself was trying to push us off the road, to flip our car, to end us right there.

But we made it.

Aunt Brenda’s house was a sprawling colonial in the suburbs, usually pristine, now looking ominous under the gray, churning sky. Every light in the house was on.

We burst through the front door, soaking wet and frantic.

The living room was a scene of chaotic grief. Aunt Brenda was sitting on the couch, clutching a glass of wine, staring at the TV which was playing a news report about the fire at Eric’s shop. Mom was pacing the floor, talking on the phone to an insurance agent. Julia and Bobby were sitting at the dining room table, arguing.

“You can’t just leave!” Bobby was yelling. “Mom needs us!”

“I can’t stay in this house!” Julia screamed back, standing up. She was wearing her running gear—leggings and a hoodie. “It smells like Dad! Everywhere I look, I see him! I need to get out. I need to run. I need to clear my head!”

“Julia, stop!” I yelled, rushing into the room.

Everyone froze. Mom dropped the phone.

“Stephanie?” Mom said, her voice trembling. “Where have you been? The police said you were at the shop. They said… they said Eric…”

“He’s gone, Mom,” I said, the words tasting like bile. “He’s gone because of the list. And Julia is next.”

Julia looked at me with a mix of fury and fear. “Shut up, Stephanie! Just shut up! I am so sick of your ghost stories! Eric died because of a fire! Dad died because of a stupid accident! It’s not a curse!”

“It is!” I shouted, pulling the book out. “Look at the pattern! Howard. Eric. Next is the second child of the first line. That’s you, Julia! You have to stay here. You have to sit down and not touch anything sharp, not go near any windows, not—”

“I am going for a run!” Julia screamed. She grabbed her headphones and shoved them into her ears. “I am going to run until I can’t feel anything anymore!”

She marched toward the back door—the sliding glass door that led to the patio.

“No!” Charlie lunged for her.

“Don’t touch me!” Julia shoved him back. She was strong, hysterical. She threw the door open.

The wind roared into the house, scattering papers and knocking over a vase on the mantle.

“Julia, please!” Aunt Brenda begged, standing up. “Don’t go out there! It’s a hurricane!”

“I don’t care!” Julia yelled over the wind. She stepped out onto the patio.

I saw it before it happened. The potential energy turning into kinetic.

The wind was gusting at fifty miles per hour. On the patio, there was a heavy glass table with a large umbrella folded down in the center.

Julia ran past the table, heading for the gate.

A sudden, violent gust caught the umbrella. It didn’t just tip the table; it lifted it. The heavy metal base scraped across the concrete.

“Julia!” I screamed.

She didn’t hear me. She had her headphones in.

She opened the gate and sprinted out into the alleyway behind the house. It was a service road where the garbage trucks picked up the neighborhood trash.

I ran after her. Charlie was right behind me.

We burst out into the rain.

Julia was running down the middle of the alley, her head down, sobbing.

Down the street, a garbage truck was backing up. The backup beep—beep, beep, beep—was drowned out by the thunder and the wind.

The driver was looking in his side mirror, but the rain obscured his view.

“Julia! Move!” Charlie bellowed.

She kept running. Straight toward the truck.

But it wasn’t the truck that was the danger. Not directly.

The wind tore a loose slate shingle from the roof of the neighbor’s house.

It flew through the air like a frisbee.

It struck a power line above the alley.

SNAP.

The live wire danced and sparked, hissing like a snake. It whipped down.

It didn’t hit Julia. It hit the wet pavement right in front of her.

Julia saw the sparks. She screamed and tried to stop. She skid on the wet asphalt.

She fell.

She fell directly into the path of the garbage truck’s rear compactor loading arm.

The driver, startled by the sparks from the wire, slammed on his brakes.

The truck skidded on the wet leaves. The rear end swung out.

CRUNCH.

It wasn’t a clean hit. The heavy metal hydraulic arm of the truck pinned Julia against the brick wall of the neighbor’s garden.

We heard the sound. The sickening pop of bone and the sudden silence of her scream.

The truck stopped. The driver jumped out, yelling.

We reached her a second later.

She was pinned. Crushed from the waist down. Her eyes were wide, staring at the sky, glassing over. Blood was pooling in the rainwater, swirling into the drain.

“No, no, no,” Charlie dropped to his knees, trying to pull the hydraulic arm. It wouldn’t budge.

Julia coughed once. A bubble of blood formed on her lips. And then she was gone.

The rain washed over her face, masking the tears that were no longer falling.

I stood there, paralyzed. The list. Julia.

Crossed out.

“Bobby,” I whispered.

I turned around.

Bobby had followed us out. He was standing in the open gateway of the backyard, staring at his sister’s broken body. He was screaming, a soundless, open-mouthed wail of agony.

He stepped forward, into the alley.

“Bobby, stay back!” I yelled.

The live wire. The one that had caused Julia to fall. It was still dancing on the ground, just a few feet away.

The water was rising in the alley, creating a puddle that connected the wire to the metal gate… and to Bobby.

“Don’t touch the gate!” Charlie screamed.

Bobby didn’t hear. He reached out to grab the metal latch for support as his knees gave way.

ZZZ-ZAK.

The electricity arced.

Bobby stiffened. His body convulsed violently, locked onto the metal gate. Smoke began to rise from his hands. His eyes rolled back into his head.

It lasted for five seconds, but it felt like an eternity.

Then, the fuse on the pole blew with a loud POP, and the wire went dead.

Bobby crumpled to the ground.

“Bobby!” Aunt Brenda came running out of the house, screaming.

“Don’t touch him!” I tackled her before she could reach the wet pavement.

We lay there in the rain, a pile of broken family members. Julia crushed. Bobby fried.

In the span of five minutes, the entire second generation of Howard’s line had been wiped out.

The design was efficient. It was brutal. And it was accelerating.


The next hour was a blur of flashing lights, paramedics, and police questions we couldn’t answer. Aunt Brenda was taken away in an ambulance, sedated again, possibly having suffered a heart attack.

Mom, Charlie, and I sat in the waiting room of the hospital—again. The same hospital where the morgue was. The same hospital where Bludworth was probably sharpening his scalpels.

Mom was catatonic. She stared at the wall, rocking back and forth. “They’re all gone. Howard. Eric. Julia. Bobby. All gone.”

I looked at the book. My hands were shaking so hard I tore the page slightly.

Darlene.

Mom was next.

“We can’t stay here,” I whispered to Charlie. “Hospitals are full of death. Oxygen tanks. Defibrillators. Slippery floors. Infections.”

“Where do we go, Steph?” Charlie asked, his eyes hollow. “There is nowhere safe. You said it yourself. The house wasn’t safe. The shop wasn’t safe. The alley wasn’t safe.”

“We have to try the plan,” I said. “Bludworth’s plan.”

“Suicide?” Charlie hissed. “Are you insane?”

“Not suicide. Controlled death. If Mom dies… and we bring her back… maybe it skips her.”

“Mom is in shock, Steph! You think we can just explain this to her? ‘Hey Mom, we need to drown you in the bathtub real quick, trust us’?”

“We don’t have a choice! Look at her!” I pointed to Mom.

Above her head, a heavy television mounted on the wall bracket was flickering. The storm outside was causing power surges. The bracket looked loose.

I saw the screw turn. Just a fraction.

“Mom, move!” I grabbed her arm and pulled her out of the chair.

CRASH.

The television fell. It smashed the plastic chair where she had been sitting a second ago into pieces.

The screen shattered, sending glass across the waiting room floor.

People screamed. Nurses came running.

Mom looked at the smashed chair, then at me. Her eyes cleared for a moment. She saw the terror in my face. She saw the truth.

“It’s coming for me,” she whispered.

“Yes,” I said, crying. “It is. We have to leave. Now.”

We ran out of the hospital. We didn’t wait for the car. We just ran into the night.

“The lake,” I said. “Miller’s Lake. It’s quiet. No machines. Just water.”

“We’re going to drown Mom?” Charlie asked, horrified.

“No,” Mom said, stopping in the rain. She looked at us. She looked at the wreckage of her family. “No. You’re not going to drown me.”

“Mom, please, we have a plan—”

“I’m not going to let you kill yourselves trying to save me,” Mom said firmly. “I watched Howard die. I watched Eric. I heard about the kids. This… thing. It wants payment.”

“Mom, don’t talk like that,” I pleaded.

She grabbed both of our hands. “If I die, does it stop? Does it skip you?”

“We don’t know,” I sobbed. “Bludworth said maybe… if there’s an intervention… or new life…”

“I’m the intervention,” Mom said.

We were standing on a street corner. The light was red. A massive 18-wheeler truck was barreling down the wet road, its horn blaring as it tried to brake for the light.

“Mom, no!”

She looked at us one last time. “Live. Please, just live.”

She stepped off the curb.

She didn’t run. She just walked. Calmly. Into the middle of the intersection.

The truck driver slammed on the brakes. The tires locked. The trailer jackknifed.

But physics is physics. Mass times velocity.

The truck hit her.

It wasn’t like the movies. There was no slow motion. Just a brutal thud and she was gone, swept under the wheels.

The truck spun out, crashing into a lamppost.

Charlie screamed. He tried to run to her. I held him back.

“She did it for us,” I wailed, burying my face in his wet shirt. “She sacrificed herself.”

The list.

Darlene. Crossed out.

We stood in the rain, orphans. The last two.


We buried Mom three days later. It was a small service. Just me and Charlie. Aunt Brenda was still in a psychiatric hold.

The world felt gray. Colorless.

But we were alive.

“Do you think it worked?” Charlie asked me as we drove away from the cemetery. “Do you think she broke the chain?”

I looked at the book. The last two names were Charlie and Stephanie.

They weren’t crossed out. But nothing had happened for three days. No falling pianos. No gas leaks.

“Maybe,” I said. “Maybe she traded her life for ours.”

We tried to go back to normal. We moved into a small apartment together on the ground floor. No elevators. No balconies. We removed all sharp objects. We checked the gas lines daily.

A week passed. Then two.

We started to breathe again.

One afternoon, Charlie was cooking dinner. Spaghetti. He was boiling water.

I was sitting at the table, reading a magazine, trying to distract myself.

I heard a sound. A familiar sound.

Hiss.

“Charlie, is the water boiling over?” I asked.

“No, I just put it on,” he called back from the fridge.

Hiss.

I looked at the stove. The pilot light was out. But the gas was on.

“Charlie! The gas!”

He rushed over. “I didn’t touch it! The knob turned itself!”

He reached to turn it off.

As he reached, the sleeve of his polyester shirt brushed against the electric toaster on the counter.

The toaster had a frayed cord.

SNAP.

A spark.

The gas.

I didn’t even have time to scream.

The explosion blew the windows out of the apartment.

I was thrown backward, slamming into the wall. My ears rang. The room was filled with smoke and fire.

“Charlie!” I screamed, coughing.

I crawled through the debris. The kitchen was an inferno.

I found him. He was lying near the fridge. He was burned, badly. A piece of the cabinetry had fallen on his chest.

“Charlie! No, no, no!” I tried to lift the wood. It was too heavy.

He looked up at me. His face was covered in soot. Blood trickled from his ear.

“Steph,” he wheezed. “It didn’t… stop.”

“Hold on! I’m getting you out!”

“No,” he gasped. “The list. I’m… before… you.”

He coughed, a terrible, wet sound.

“You have to… die,” he whispered. “Die… and come back.”

“Charlie, I can’t!”

“Do it!” he screamed, gripping my hand with his burned fingers. “Beat… the… house.”

His grip went slack. His eyes stared past me, at the flames licking the ceiling.

Charlie was gone.

I was alone.

I was the last name.

I sat there in the burning apartment. The heat was unbearable. I could feel my skin blistering.

Die and come back.

I looked around. There was no way out. The fire blocked the door. The windows were barred (our safety precaution).

I was going to burn to death. Just like the vision at the restaurant.

No.

I saw the sink. The pipe had burst in the explosion. Water was spraying out, filling a large plastic storage bin we used for recycling.

Water.

I crawled to the bin. It was filling up.

If I burned, I died. If I drowned… I died.

But if I drowned, my body would be intact. The firefighters were coming. I could hear the sirens.

If they found me drowned, they would try CPR.

It was the only chance.

I took a deep breath. The smoke filled my lungs, making me dizzy.

I plunged my head into the water.

It was cold. Shockingly cold against the heat of the fire.

My body fought. The survival instinct kicked in. Breathe. Breathe.

I held on. I thought of Iris. I thought of Mom. I thought of Charlie.

My lungs burned. My vision went black. Red spots danced in the darkness.

I am not afraid, I told myself. I am cheating the design.

I opened my mouth and inhaled the water.

The darkness swallowed me whole.


Light.

White, blinding light.

Pain. My chest felt like it had been cracked open.

“Clear!”

THUMP.

My body arched off the gurney.

“We got a pulse! She’s back!”

I gasped, vomiting water and bile. The air tasted like diesel fumes and rain.

I was outside. Paramedics were hovering over me. The apartment building was a torch behind them.

“Easy, miss, easy. You were down for four minutes. We almost lost you.”

I grabbed the paramedic’s arm. “Charlie?”

He looked away. “I’m sorry. Your brother… he didn’t make it.”

I lay back on the stretcher, staring at the night sky. The rain fell on my face.

I was alive.

I had died. And I had come back.

I closed my eyes and let the darkness take me again, but this time, it was just sleep.


Six Months Later

The cafe was warm and smelled of roasted coffee and cinnamon. I sat by the window, watching the people of Seattle walk by.

It had been a long road. Physical therapy. Grief counseling. The nightmares were still there, but they were fading.

I was a miracle. The “Girl Who Lived.” The sole survivor of the cursed family.

I had visited William Bludworth one last time before leaving town. He had looked at me with that same cryptic smile.

“You balanced the books, Stephanie,” he had said. “You gave the house what it wanted. A death. And you stole a life back. Keep it safe.”

I took a sip of my latte.

I was meeting a friend I had made in my grief support group. Sarah. She was late.

I looked at the menu on the table.

Special of the Day: The Lazarus Blend.

I smiled. Lazarus. The man who came back from the dead.

Outside, a construction crew was working on the road. A massive crane towered over the street, lifting a pallet of steel beams.

I felt a breeze.

The door to the cafe opened. A customer walked in.

But the door didn’t close. The closer was broken.

The wind blew in. It ruffled the pages of my menu.

It blew the napkin off my table.

I watched the napkin flutter to the floor.

Suddenly, a cold feeling washed over me. The same feeling I had at the barbecue. The same feeling at the shop.

I looked out the window.

The crane was swaying.

The wind was picking up. Not a gentle breeze. A gale.

I looked at the street sign across the road.

Bus Route 180.

My heart stopped.

  1. The number of the flight Bludworth mentioned. The number on the license plate of the truck that killed Mom.

I looked at the crane again. The cable was fraying. I could see it. I had the sight now. I could see the individual strands of steel snapping.

Snap. Snap. Snap.

The pallet of steel beams shifted.

I stood up, my chair scraping loudly on the floor.

“No,” I whispered. “No, I paid the debt! I died!”

I looked around the cafe. It was crowded. Mothers with strollers. Students with laptops.

If the beams fell, they would crush the front of the building.

I had to warn them.

But then I remembered Iris. I remembered how she warned people at the restaurant. And how Death hunted them down anyway.

If I saved them… I would just start a new list.

But if I didn’t…

The cable snapped.

The massive steel beams fell.

Time slowed down. I saw the beams plummeting toward the glass window. Toward me.

I realized the truth in that final microsecond.

There is no new life. There is no loophole. There is only the design.

I didn’t cheat Death. I just bought a ticket for the sequel.

I closed my eyes.

CRASH.

Darkness.

THE END

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